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Post  zarkonking Sat Aug 23, 2008 4:12 am

Name: Syaoran

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Race: Level 1 mutant, However most mistake him for a normy

Affiliation: was born into the Red storm, however left for his own reasons, now a wanderer

Inventory:
-1 very well preserved knife wich has a 15 inch blade named "Souhi" (the blade itself is 15 inches, the handle is 6 therefore the total length of Souhi is 21 inches long) straped on lower back wich his foster parents gave him for completing the right of passage
-1 well preserved Handgun called "desert eagle" wich he simply calls Dez wich his foster parents gave him for completing the right of passage
-1 long cloak, the cloak reaches down to slightly past his heels, and has a hood he can pull over his head to keep himself protected from the sun.
-1 set of tools used for making metal shells for his "desert eagle" as well as fixing things
-1 worn out picture of his parents
-2 total clips these are used as a quick reload during battle, both are filled with metal bullets.
-gogles (in case of high winds, protects eyes)

Physical Appearance

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Eye colour: Brown
Hair colour: Brown
Height:5'5
Any distinguishing marks:None

Syaoran wears a long green cloak with a hood while he travels, this is used to protect him from the sun, inside the cloak are many pockets were he puts his tools and canteens of water. under the cloak is a blue T-shirt. He wears an almost white pair of cloth pants. His sword Souhi is strapped to his lower back with the handle pointed to his right so he can draw it easily, it is hidden under his cloak making it impossible for it to be seen as long as his cloak is on. his desert eagle is in a holster on his right side (he's right handed)

Personality: Syaoran is slightly naive, and will do almost anything for information regarding his parent and their location. in battle he will attempt to develope a decent strategy before attacking his opponent these strategies often include his speed, he is very calm, even when angry he is rather calm, however he will concentrate more. outside of battle he normally has a small smile on his face and is very polite to people he will help in any way he can, as long as it wont take to long for him to do.

Strengths: up close fighting, he has trained with blades for most of his life, speed, stamina, and stealth

Weaknesses: a little naive, far away battles, although he has a desert eagle he never really trained using guns. his wish to never kill anyone, and that he will pay almost any cost for information on his parents.


History:
Birth: after only a few months a Syaoran's birth his real parents abandoned him inside new york city on the doorstep of a random family, along with a short sword named "Souhi", a hand gun, and a note to the family, this note read:

Dear Family
Me and my husband have left you with this, our baby boy
the reason we left our son with you is because we are
currently running from a rather large group of people who
want us dead, and if they find us we do not want our son
to be killed to, alongside him is a family heirloom named
"Souhi" as well as a very powerful hand gun called a desert
eagle, we wish for him to reiceve these gifts after he
passes the Right of passage of you clan, thank you that is all.

there was a picture of a man and a woman smiling happily holding a baby eclosed in the envolope that held the letter, besedes that there was nothing else, all Syaorans real parents had left him with was a short sword with a name, a gun, a letter and a picture.

Childhood: The family that had takin Syaoran in was kind, yet stern when the need arose, they decided to raise him as if he were there own, at least until he passed the ordeal at the age of 15, then they would tell him the truth. As he grew up his foster father taght him how to wield a blade properly, and him and Syaoran would trai for hours on end learning the different slashes and attacks. by the age of 14 Syaoran was very well with using any kind of blade.

Right of passage: Syaoran's right of passage was far harder than he had thought it would be the one month he spent in the desert was long and grueling. during the day he would often run out of water and nearly dehydrate, at night many creatures would attck him, and with very little to no defence he would often be forced to run (he didnt have any weoplons during his right of passage). Even though he almost died several times, it taght him how to survive out in the desert, and after the third week he was doing great.

Recently: after his right of passage his foster parents told him everything and gave him everything his real parents had left for him. He was so shocked it took him 2 days just to leave the house or speak, he then decided he would leave and go on a journey to find them, even though they might be dead. Although his foster parents were very sad to see him leave, they were also proud that he had grown into such a young man. Since they knew he couldnt travel very well on foot so they bartered alot of there stuff away to get him a ship that they all named "night breeze"

Now: He now roams the dessert going from town to town in an attempt to find out as much as he can about his missing parents.

Any other points: Has a dune rider named "night breeze"

Description of "night breeze"
Night breeze is a small dune rider originaly meant for a maximum of three people, however because this acts as Syaoran's house, as well as his means of travel it can now only fit Syaoran and one other person comfortably. It has both a sail and a motor, given to him by his foster parents when he decided to go look for his real parents they named it nightbreeze for because there was a very gentle breeze that night when Syaoran was found on his foster parents doorstep. he only uses the motor when he absolutely has to because of the amount of noise it makes


Last edited by zarkonking on Mon Aug 25, 2008 9:58 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Post  Dreamslayer2 Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:28 pm

-1 very well preserved knife wich has a 15 inch blade named "Souhi" (the blade itself is 15 inches, the handle is 6 therefore the total length of Souhi is 21 inches long) straped on lower back wich he got from correctly doing his right of passage
-1 well preserved Handgun called "desert eagle" wich he simply calls Dez wich he got from correctly doing his right of passage

-Right of Passage doesn't give you weapons.

Handgun = Glastic or Metal Bullets?

Silent Motor = no, Sand/Dirt would get into it Very easily causing it to be very loud all the time. This is the same with all motors.
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Post  zarkonking Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:43 pm

okay, i fixed it so it says his foster parents gave them to him as the note said, and the desert eagle now only shoots metal bullets, and he only uses the motor when he absolutely has to, because of the noise, hope that fixes all problems =]
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Post  Darkwolf Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:16 pm

okay, just remember you don't have an infinite amount of bullets, since they're metal.

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